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Sputtering Flame (a poem)

A screenshot of a poem, entitled "Sputtering Flame," in simple white text on a dark background.

The poem reads:

Your wondrous spark set me alight.
A candle, burning against the darkness 
Never so alive, never so full of warmth and purpose:
To illuminate your every move 
And keep the monsters at bay. 
You would dance in my light,
And with every flicker of my flame, the playful shadows would dance along with you.

You inspired me to burn brighter 
Though neither of us seemed to notice 
The wax melting
Dripping 
Pooling on the tablecloth 
In globs of color 
Because, misshapen though I became,
I felt the warm joy of being able to watch you thrive. 

As I began to sputter, rather than tend my flame 
You grew upset at the fading light 
And the long unflattering shadows it cast upon you. 
The wax gathered at your feet now 
Cold, hardened, no longer malleable 
And you grew cold as well. 

Reduced to ash and ember
Still I smolder
Though I can no longer brighten your smile,
No longer warm your skin,
No longer keep your demons from you.
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A screenshot of a poem, entitled "Sputtering Flame," in simple white text on a dark background.

The poem reads:

Your wondrous spark set me alight.
A candle, burning against the darkness
Never so alive, never so full of warmth and purpose:
To illuminate your every move
And keep the monsters at bay.
You would dance in my light,
And with every flicker of my flame, the playful shadows would dance along with you.

You inspired me to burn brighter
Though neither of us seemed to notice
The wax melting
Dripping
Pooling on the tablecloth
In globs of color
Because, misshapen though I became,
I felt the warm joy of being able to watch you thrive.

As I began to sputter, rather than tend my flame
You grew upset at the fading light
And the long unflattering shadows it cast upon you.
The wax gathered at your feet now
Cold, hardened, no longer malleable
And you grew cold as well.

Reduced to ash and ember
Still I smolder
Though I can no longer brighten your smile,
No longer warm your skin,
No longer keep your demons from you.
Pardon my angst and brooding. Going through a difficult breakup after a long and agonizing decline. Over the past few months as the relationship began to circle the drain I started writing poems to process my feelings.

After yet another sleepless night, I penned this one around 4am this morning.
8 hours ago

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joost 7 hours ago
Ach. I have been there. :-(
Hang in there. It's a dark tunnel. But I see light glimmering.
joost 7 hours ago
('Ach' is related to jiddisch 'oy'. Perhaps scottish 'och'. Same guttural g. Interjection of empathy. So not like 'argh')
0y3ahSansAcut3 6 hours ago
Nice poem, and metaphor. Best to you, and the new day's light.
MackReed pro 5 hours ago
peace and serenity, brother.

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